Si Tukang Provokasi
dentum dentam
bising si pahat
kentung kentang
bising si tukul
riuh memahat
rumah tegaknya tiada
riuh menukul
hasilnya habuk semata mata
siapa memahat?
siapa menukul?
oh! si tukang provokasi rupanya.
Thursday, September 14, 2006
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16 Bangsawan Menatang Sembah:
king,
ada juga si tukang provokasi yg bijak bekerja senyap2, tak kedengaran dentum-dentam. tau2 saja siap rumah dibina!
:D
kalau ada hasil takpela ini habuk semata mata
wah, boss! heh. kau lupa letak penanda wacana ',' [koma] di setiap akhir ayat.
kira provokasi tak ni? haha.
Aku pakai driller..
amanitium : amboi amboi
indera : whoa provokasi yang berteknologi!
nama penuhnya
si tukang provokasi arus perdana
huh tak paham aku
saya pun tak paham la camni
ha ha
Tukang provokasi mmg kerjanya membikin habuk!
....jadi apa?
Mana boleh pahat berbunyi kalau takder penukulnya.
provok ngan komplen same ke lain aa?
aku pon xdapat paham =|
esis, book : takkanla!!
areyoung : sah! kau pun tak paham!
mazudi : pun sama!
kure : ni lagi sorang
fig : hancuss!
provok ni cam hangat2kan orang tu supaya dia buat sesuatu tindakan.. betu tak king?? :)
pandai!
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